• screwdriver
    Fiction writing

    A screwdriver, a flat pack and heartbreak

    The screwdriver

    Knocking her to the floor he now grabbed the first thing that he saw.  The screwdriver with its red handle urging him to do something he was going to regret. In the moment, his rage flowed through him, like a waterfall cascading down rocks. This was it the bitch was not going to hurt him anymore.

    *

    The attack

    Detective Jim Monroe now surveyed the scene of the evident vicious attack with the screwdriver pointing towards the sky. The Ikea, ‘Billy bookcase’ unfinished next to her. He had built many flat packs but what had made this person so angry? He was certain that it wasn’t Ikea. Observing those around him he watched Inspector Tessa Miller talking to dead woman’s husband, Phil Jakes. Mr Jakes appeared upset, but was he really? In so many cases it is the person closest to them that is driven to murder. This looked brutal, there must have been a good reason, but what was it?

    Writing in his small note book, he now watched the dead woman’s mother trying to play with the children. It was Christmas time, not the best time, if there was a best time, to lose a parent or a child. He could see that she was being strong, holding back tears that would keep flowing once she started.

    Her father sat staring at his newspaper in silence. Detective Monroe was not sure what to make of the scene, no one was giving anything away. The family were showing life as usual, as if Julie had not just been carried away in a body bag. What had he missed?

    The Christmas tree was surrounded by presents, the only person visibly affected was Mr Jakes and he was their main suspect. Scratching his head, he now walked out to his patrol car to make some phone calls, there was something really wrong here.

    *

    On top of the cliffs

    Sitting on a bench, on the top of a cliff he stared into the far distance. His eyes were wet with tears, he knew that his life was over. Knowing that he shouldn’t have let his anger control him he put his head in his hands. He knew that the pain he now felt was nothing compared to little Rosemary and Jack, they had lost their mummy and they would never see her again.

    Not knowing what to do now, wanting to run with the guilt consuming him. It had gone to far, and he couldn’t turn the clocks back. Thinking of the children, he could feel his head was pounding. Telling himself that he needed to hand himself in, but he was scared, life in prison would give him shelter and food but he didn’t want to go. Picturing the red screw driver he felt pain in his stomach, feeling the pressure in his head growing he knew what was about to happen before he started vomiting. Maybe he should have just concentrated on building the ‘Billy Bookcase’ he wouldn’t be in this terrible situation now.

    *

    Phil Jakes

    The house was silent as Phil Jakes sat alone at the kitchen table. Working through the beer in the fridge, he couldn’t imagine life without Julie. Losing his wife, he was devastated, looking at their wedding photograph hanging on the wall, he remembered how happy they both were on that day, her beautiful smile, they were meant for each other.

    They had recently been having some problems which they were working through, and with all the stress of Christmas he hadn’t paid her as much attention as he normally would have done. The extra hours he had worked to ensure that the children could have nice presents. Jack and Rosemary had both wanted new bicycles. A few nights ago, he had finally purchased them and brought them home.  They were now sat in the garage waiting for Chrisrmas day. Julie had been overjoyed to see them and had given him a hug for working the extra hours.

    Julie would never know about the bracelet he had bought her. The extra hours worked and haggling on the bikes and cashback that had contributed to it. He had been looking forward to the 25th, now just two days away and it was ruined.

    He had let his in laws put Jack and Rosemary to bed, at five and seven they were too young to understand, they just kept asking where mummy was. They had been incredible but he was sure that his mother in law, Deborah Miller was going to crack soon and once she did then his father in law, Brian would as well.

    *

    The lover

    “Are you sure?”
    “Yes sir.”
    “Why else?” Detective Monroe thought. “There always has to be heartache involved.”
    “Okay so who is he?”
    “Sir, his name is Mark Wells. He is an Engineer at the local power plant. Julie was one of the secretaries.”
    “Always the office party, too much Prosecco and fun. A Spurned lover had seemed too obvious”.
    “Okay, you and Inspector Jeffries please go and bring him in. We will question him at the station.”
    Walking to the hot chocolate machine, Detective Jim Monroe, was now thinking again about the ‘Billy Bookcase’. Was it significant to the case? Or was it just coincidence that it was nearby half done? Death by screwdriver was really not the way to go.

    Striding back to his office whilst enjoying his warm comforting chocolate he wandered again about Husband, Phil.

    Pulling out his chair he now sunk himself into it and placed his cardboard cup on his desk. Why was the bookcase bothering him?

    The bookcase

    It was now 9.00am, not too early for a phonecall. Dialling Mr Jakes number, he willed him to answer.

    “Hello.”
    “Hello, Mr Jakes, its Detective Monroe.”
    “Oh hi, any news?”
    “Just wondering, errr, who was building the bookcase?”
    Embarrassed, Phil said, “I started it, but gave up, there seemed to be parts missing.”
    “Hmm, sounds about right for a flat pack. So, was someone else building it?”
    “Julie had decided to do it herself, but I would have been surprised if she had completed it. She has never built a flat pack”.
    “So, any ideas whose DNA we might find on the screw driver?”
    Phil thought, “well I know she has been friendly with one of the engineers at work, someone called Mark. Don’t know why he would kill her though. The book case might drive someone insane but not to murder”.
    “We will keep you informed Mr Jakes.”
    “Okay”

    Hanging up the phone, Jim Monroe, played through the events in his head. They must have been having quite a conversation for Mark Wells to stab her with the screwdriver. His phone now rang, making him jump.

    Mark Wells

    “Hello, Monroe.”
    “Sir, its Tessa, err Wells, he’s missing and no one has seen him since yesterday”
    “Right, I’m going to phone the lab, check what has been found on the screwdriver.”
    “We’ll keep looking sir.”
    “Yes, can you alert the local services and the coast guard, we need to find him.”
    “I will do that now.”
    “Let me know if you have any news.”

    Dragging his hands through his hair he picked up the phone again.
    “Hello, labs.”
    “Hi, its Monroe, do you have the results.”
    “Yes sir, fingerprints on it match with a Mr Mark Wells.”
    “Thank you very much”.

    Putting the phone down, so that’s that confirmed, Death by screwdriver from a man who was used for a little bit of fun. Senseless entertainment that had led to an incomplete bookcase and a blood covered screwdriver.

    *

    So, what has happened to Mark Wells?

    Sat on the cliffs in despair, Mark had not known what else to do. He had nothing to live for. He had murdered the lady he had really cared for. Standing up, he walked to the cliff edge, he took a last look around before closing his eyes and hurling himself off the cliff. Hitting the water with a force that hurt he let the icey waters take over.

    Julie had died at his hands and now he let the waters cold embrace take over, death was better then prison.

    *

    A day later his body was washed up on the beach and a couple walking their dog found him. Detective Monroe was not surprised when he was informed. He looked at the screwdriver sat in his desk drawer. He would never see a flat pack in the same way again or a small screwdriver. A sad story that had ended in the death of two people and a family heartbroken.

    Time to speak to Julies family again, it was now boxing day, but felt like any other day.  Jim Monroe picked up the phone again, all in a days work and all because of a screwdriver in the wrong place.

    Written for – Writers Unite photo prompt

    For more see, A ghost sighting and a wooden box

  • broken window kitchen
    Fiction writing

    A broken window and a worrying loss

    The broken window

    There was something not quite right about the window. It looked as if someone had forced it open. Freda leaned back and rubbed her head, she looked around her, nothing seemed to have been touched. Her precious keyboard was in the corner of the room with her music and pile of notes next to it. What was she not seeing? the handle looked broken, she then realised that this could be seen as a broken window.

    Rex, her Labrador, sat looking up at her, his big eyes pleading it wasn’t me. She realised then that it had been opened from the inside and the possible culprit was the animal who she loved the most. Was this something that Labradors do? Open windows? She wasn’t sure but what was the other explanation?

    It had been a long afternoon, which she had spent with her best friend Ruby and new boyfriend Mark. She was pleased that Ruby had found someone that appeared to really care about her. The afternoon had ended with her feeling drained and she had fallen asleep on the settee.  When she woke she now found herself under a blanket with the window broken.

    Putting her feet on the floor now and pushing herself up, she was hungry and thirsty. Looking at the clock she could see it was now 6.30, she wondered what time she had fallen asleep.

    * * * * *

    A walk in the woods

    It had been a good afternoon and the three of us had enjoyed a walk in the woods, enjoying the surroundings. Mark had jumped in the wet leaves and Freda had laughed at Rex enjoying the mud. The fresh air was something we all needed, time to relax and enjoy each other’s company.

    This was the third time that Mark had come to visit, and we had quickly become close. He is easy to talk to and we both like being outdoors. He also enjoys my music and has a great sense of humour.

    Today I had felt a sense of happiness that I hadn’t felt in a long time. Everyone was getting on and we were laughing like we had known each other for years. Freda was relaxed, which was nice to see, she had let Mark into her world quicker then I had expected. Mark seemed to have accepted that Freda was my friend and he had accepted that I didn’t want to exclude her.

    Our relationship is still very young, but I’m hopeful, especially as our day did not end in quite the way we thought it would. I’m thankful that Freda had fallen asleep and she must have needed it as she slept through this afternoon’s incident. Seeing how tired she was, I had put a blanket over her and let her sleep.

    The intruder

    We had decided to take Rex for a walk around the block, leaving Freda in peace for a while. This had seemed like a good plan until we returned and found a blue jean covered leg disappearing out of the window behind her. We hadn’t been gone long but someone must have been watching us leave.

    Mark had immediately ran outside to chase after him, but the intruder had outrun him. He came back in, panting,
    “Is the Police station nearby?”
    “It’s about five minutes up the road”.
    “Right, Freda should be safe if we leave Rex here. Let’s walk to the police station and tell someone, we might not be taken seriously on 999.”
    I was too shocked to argue, if we hadn’t come back when we had done, anything could have happened. Looking at the window, it had been forced open, but at least there should be prints. I glanced at Freda still peacefully sleeping.

    Leaving Freda

    “Should we leave her a note?”
    “I think it would scare her, we need to tell her in person. For now, if she wakes the window will just be a confusing mystery. We won’t be long and hopefully the police will come back with us.”
    I nodded, he did make sense. I was fearful of leaving her, but I knew that Rex would see off an intruder if they came back. Freda’s pile of sheet music now caught my eye, I wondered if for any reason someone was wanting to steal that. She was good, but why would anyone break in to steal her material? If it was for her music, I suspected he was a local who had heard us playing in the pub.

    A walk to the police station

    I realised the sooner we went, the sooner we would be back, but I wanted to just phone them, Mark was already stood on the garden path and there was no stopping him. He had decided that we needed to walk to the station so that’s where we were going. I didn’t want to argue with him, I sighed, looking at Freda lying there vulnerable. Mark was right, Rex would look after her. Turning around, I walked out of the door and shut it behind me. I glanced at the metal around the lock, I couldn’t see evidence of it being forced but an expert would have skillfully picked the lock.

    “Come on Ruby, let’s go.”
    “Okay, I’m coming.”
    I followed him down the path and we walked quietly to the station. I struggled for things to say, I was worried, and my mind kept thinking of Freda and the broken window.

    * * * * *

    ‘Baby Blue’

    Freda sat in her kitchen drinking her tea, thoughts of the previous week playing her music in the ‘Red Lion’. Remembering the dark haired man with a pony tail staring at her, he had made her nervous. She had thought nothing more of it then, but now she thought more about the broken window.

    Pushing her chair back with a loud screech across the kitchen floor, she now picked up her mug wanting to check her music sheets. Walking into her lounge, Rex followed tail wagging. With a purpose now she put down her mug on her coffee table and dragged her music on to the floor.

    The song she had been singing had been a sad one called ‘Baby Blue’. She was not surprised to find the sheet music missing. She quietly cursed, she could remember the song and it could be rewritten but it had now been stolen. Freda feared that he would sell it, and then she would hear it being sung by someone else one day on the radio.

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    She looked at the broken window, feeling hot, sweaty and physically sick, she could feel the tears pricking her eyes. Rubbing them she was surprised to see a police car pull up outside. Then relieved when she saw Ruby and Mark get out of the back. Ten minutes later she was sat at her kitchen table telling a police woman about the man in the pub.  Mark had already described the man that he chased, tall with a pony tail that swung as he ran.

    * * * * *

    The change in the day

    Our day had gone from a lovely happy afternoon walk in the woods, to Freda being robbed of ’Baby Blue’ whilst she slept. I was annoyed with myself because if we hadn’t left her today then she wouldn’t have been burgled. Unfortunate for him that he hadn’t broken in earlier when we were in the woods. Freda would not have a broken window with him escaping as we had walked in. However, Mark would not have been able to corroborate Freda’s description of him.

    This really had been a turn of events. I had enjoyed singing ‘Baby Blue’ and I hoped and prayed that the police found him and the music. I wondered who he was, why did he want it? And was that song actually worth something? Maybe as Ruby and Freda, we could be a success, maybe we were destined for more than singing in pubs.

    Mark took my hand,

    “We need to find ‘Baby Blue’, we can’t let anyone else have it’.
    “Don’t worry, we will find him, we have your descriptions and we’ve taken prints. He picked your door lock, you might want to consider changing it. Here is some information on locks.”

    Fixing the door lock and window

    The police man passed me a leaflet, I thanked him and put it on the table, grateful but amused at the leaflet about locks. They then left and we were now alone again.
    “Don’t worry about the window and door lock Freda, I’ll fix it for you before I go home tomorrow”.

    We both looked at him, both feeling grateful that he was here to save the day and wow what a day it had been.

    For more see – Singing, our reflections and a first date (part 6 of Ruby and Freda, this is part 7)

    Written for Grammys Grid – Short story sentence prompt – There was something not quite right about the window. It looked as if…

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