• exotic
    blog battle,  Fiction writing

    An exotic cocktail and a family

    Sarah

    She sat staring into her exotic cocktail of Pimms, cola and cold tea.  Lighting another calming cigarette, her life was a mess. What next? She had watched James ripped away from her, destined for foster care.  Looking at the pile of white pills in front of her, taking them would solve her problems. Reaching for the roll of toilet roll next to her, she wiped the string of snot from her nose before mopping her soaking wet face with the back of her hand.

    Was taking her life, really the answer? James was five, he had his whole life ahead of him, he didn’t need her. 

    As her mobile vibrated, she ignored it.  Not wanting to talk to anybody her sisters name flashed across the screen. She was the last person that deserved her time. Picking up a handful of tablets, this was it. Chucking them in her mouth she grabbed her exotic drink and drank.

    Debbie

    Our family situation had always been dysfunctional.  Both parents had always worked long hours.  We had come home from school and typically let ourselves in the back door.  Cereal for breakfast and dinner, Jam sandwiches for lunch.  My sister and I are very different.  I always thought we were both survivors, now I’m not so sure. Sarah was attending college studying business and then her life took a new direction.

    Sinking into debt, Sarah had been responsible for a series of robberies.  Over the last two years, she had been in and out of police station cells.  Social services had decided my nephew James was not safe in her care.  I was asked to act as a guardian for him but I have no desires to ever be a parent.  I work long hours and unlike our parents I’m not raising a child on jam, bread, cereal, milk and loneliness. Sarah had been angry with me, but a loving foster family is surely the best place for him.

    As I arrived at my office, my secretary welcomed me.

    “Debbie, a Mrs Haynes has been phoning for you.”

    “Mrs Haynes?”

    “Here’s her number, and your 10.00 appointment is already here.”

    The phone call

    It was only 9.30, they were early.   Looking at Lorraine’s scribble I wondered who Mrs Haynes was. Picking up my desk phone, I dialled her number.

    “Hello Carol Haynes, Social Services”.

    “Hi, this is Debbie Griffiths.”

    “Hello, we are needing to talk to you about your nephew James Griffith’s.  Could you please come to the office to see us.”

    What had happened now? Should I talk to Sarah?

    “Err, when should I come in?”

    “Please come as soon as you can”.

    “I will be there around 1.00 is that okay?”

     

    I sat back in my chair, was James alright?

    Picking up the phone again I wanted to hear Sarah’s voice. I could feel my heart sink as it went to voicemail.  Would we ever be friends again?

    Sarah

    As Henry arrived downstairs, he hadn’t expected to find his lodger slumped over the kitchen table.  Her exotic cocktail mix pooling on the table next to her. Dialling 999, he felt for her pulse.  Swearing out loud, she was already dead.

    Grabbing Sarah’s phone, he searched for Debbie.

    Debbie

    Sitting with a box of tissues in the social services waiting room my head was pounding.  Phoning Henry Lee back that morning, I hadn’t expected such terrible news.  With no chance of Sarah having James back. Our parents were certainly not having him.  How do you juggle a full-time job as a Solicitor and a small boy?  Surely adoption was the best option.

    “Miss Griffiths?”

    “Yes, that’s me”, I sniffed.

    “Thank you for coming in, we have a problem”.

     

    Sat in the office I stared at the blank yellow walls and then watched Mrs Haynes make me a coffee from her machine.  Placing the cup in front of me, she said,

    “I’m sorry to hear about your sister and thank you for coming in in such difficult circumstances.”

    Her words felt empty. She seemed more bothered in business than happy families.

    “So, what’s happened?”

    An upset child

    “Today James was upset over breakfast and attacked another child with a knife. The kids are okay but his foster parents are refusing to keep him.  It would mean taking him back into the care services again, more upheaval for him.  What would you like to do?  You are his only relative that might be appropriate to have him.”

    James obviously wasn’t happy, but how could I raise a child.  I had never been fun Auntie Debbie.

    “I don’t know how to look after a child.”

    “Neither does any new mother.  You are an intelligent woman and the closest James has to his mum.  You must seriously consider this.  Please think about it, it’s a big decision but this could be one of the best decisions you ever make.  Children are not easy but they are rewarding”.

    Attacking a child with a knife, could I really be a good mum to him?

    “Mrs Haynes I will give this some thought and get back to you”.

    I thought of my next exotic holiday, having James will change my life.  Did I really have a choice?  If I don’t adopt him I could lose him.  I had lost Sarah it was time to rethink my life.

     

    Today

    Lying on my exotic Turkish beach, I watched the beautiful little boy laughing building sand castles.  Life had changed dramatically but being a single parent was more fulfilling then I ever imagined. I missed Sarah dearly and I still felt guilty for not being there when she was depressed enough to take her own life.

    We don’t know what our futures hold, but some opportunities are too special to pass by.  I was no longer alone, I had my nephew, now son James, and unlike our parents I knew I was doing a good job.

     

    Written for Blog battle – Exotic

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  • crooked house
    Fiction writing

    History of the old crooked house

    November 26th 2019

    The crooked house hid many secrets, as young teens Billy and I spent many hours there. Hiding in the cellar and exploring it’s cavernous rooms we were having too much fun to be afraid.  Maybe the house enjoyed the shrieks of happy children, but those happy children grew up.  From playing hide and seek to families and pursuing careers.  It’s now in my thirties that I sit in horror reading the danger that we were once in.

    As an Estate Agent it is my job to sell the old crooked house.  Developers had painted the front, put in a new kitchen and updated it inside.  Walking around, it’s a lovely family home, but I always needed to wrap my coat around me.  Even when sunny outside, I felt I wanted my scarf and woolly hat.  It’s only now as I feel my skin tingling that I know why.   Any moment I knew the phone was going to ring loudly disturbing my morning coffee.  This was the story of the week, maybe month or year.

    A body

    Reading the Newland Gazette, journalist Hans Lee’s had written of an unidentifiable girl’s body found in a pit in the cellar with a Snoopy watch lying next to her.  We had  spent many hours in the house, I could feel icy sweat crawling over me like ants crawling up my arms.   I thought of pretty red head Marie.  She had vanished twenty years ago and the police had decided that she had been kidnapped or murdered, she had never been found.

    Jumping at my mobile, Billy’s name flashed across the screen.

    “Jane, you seen the paper?”

    “Yes, just reading it and I can’t believe it”.

    “She might be unidentifiable but Marie always wore her Snoopy watch.  It can only be her, she was never found.”

    “Do you think she fell when playing?”

    “When she vanished, we had been playing together a while earlier.  We thought she’d gone home”.

    I could see her now, a happy child shrieking and whooping with the rest of us.  Any one of us could have fallen in that pit.  Feeling sick I wondered why we hadn’t heard her, maybe she had banged her head and couldn’t shout.

    “Jane, you still there?”

    “Yes, sorry Billy, what now? Her family moved away, should we offer to identify the watch?”

    “Yes, I’m going to ring the crime line. I’m assuming the police must have contact for the family on their records.  They will have to reopen their cold case.”

    “Yes, but this could have been just been an accident.”

    “Jane, I know you are trying to sell the house, but what else do you know about it?”

    “Not much, it’s old and it’s crooked.”

    History

    “Research it’s history.  I haven’t liked to say, but for the hours we played there I think the spirits were happy having us there”.

    I laughed,

    “Spirits, what Spirits?”

    “I’m saying no more, but there’s an old theory about red heads as well. It’s a shame thing’s hadn’t been recorded twenty years ago”.

    “They probably were but things weren’t so easily accessible back then.  Now we just ask Google.”

    “Jane have a read, it will make you shudder.  I’m going to phone the crime line, will talk later”.

    She hung up the phone as I opened my laptop, now bombarded by frantic emails.  That house was certainly not going to sell to a normal buyer now.

    Searching the internet, I found the story, the reason why the crooked house had been empty for so long.  I read how in 1985 the owners had gone missing. Leonard Brown, was later found guilty of murder in a village miles away.  His wife was never found and relatives had told how they had been desperate for children.   Was his wife haunting the property now?  Had she captured Marie?  I don’t usually believe in the supernatural but the house doesn’t have a welcoming feeling about it.  No, this place will not sell now.

    A phone call

    As my desk phone rang I expected a journalist on the other end.

    “Hello, is that Hills Estates?”

    “Err, yes it is.”

    “Hello, this is Marjorie from the BBC.  We are filming ‘Ghost Hunters’ and would love to come and visit your possible haunted house that you are selling”

    Their researchers were quick, I’d only just found out.

    “You will need to talk to the police first. I’m sure you know about the body.”

    “Yes, we aren’t filming for a few weeks but need to book the job in.  We will come to a deal over payment and will contact the police station, but will you let us film?”

    May be this could be good publicity and we were getting paid.

    “I’ll check with my boss, can I take your details?”

    Present day

    Appearing on ‘Ghost Hunters’ with the BBC was not something I ever thought would appear on my CV.  Here I am, now knowing that ghosts really do exist as I watch the film crew with their equipment.

    Since finding Marie, the police excavators had found bodies of a man and a woman in the cellar. Evidence had been found to support the idea that Mrs Rosie Brown had been having an affair with local postman Bobby Rogers.  Husband Leonard Brown had reacted badly and murdered them.  Ghosts Rosie and Bobby liked hearing us playing. but they had wanted to keep red headed Marie.   A seance had revealed this information and was the strangest experience of my life.

    There are now conversations of promoting it as a haunted house or trying to help Rosie and Bobby leave the house and cross-over to the other side. It’s my job to market it but I don’t see a family wanting to buy it, especially one with a red headed child.

    The story of the crooked house has led to teens breaking in to spend the night, scary bets between friends   Many have been asked to leave.  Only time will tell what happens to the house now, from what I’ve been told Rosie and Bobby are happy where they are, a haunted house and place of interest it might stay.

     

    Written for Write the story on Writers Unite!

    For more see A case of universal germ warfare

  • reflecting tea
    Fiction writing

    Reflecting on life with tea

    Reflecting

    The trip was over but no one would have guessed what happened next.  The scene in the pub was a fine way to end a rough weekend. The trauma of losing Freddie has led Rosie to isolate herself.  She has asked her carers to keep everyone out.  The nurse manager advised me that she is spending her days staring gloomily at her mobile phone.

    After Freddie’s death the media reported of the violent gang.  Led by the evil Marcus Ling. Different accounts have been given for his downfall. My favourite was the story of the hero trying to save the pub. If only this was true.  To die a hero, at least Rosie could be proud of him.

    Lying in her hospital bed she was barely living.  Refusing to see her son, and staring at her screen. The newspapers had reported that he was dealing drugs and things had ended in a brutal fight and Freddie’s death. I want to help Rosie but don’t know where to begin.

    Mark is worried about me but I’m thinking about Rosie. Heartbroken and unable to think of anything else.  How do you help someone whose partner has been killed? There’s nothing I can say to make it better.

    Tea leaves

    Staring at the tea leaves forming a pretty picture at the bottom of my favourite mug. I wish I could read them. Reflecting on my life, where am I heading? Life has gone wrong for Rosie, but I have Mark and Freda to also think about.

    Another text from Mark, responding to him I think about Freda. Should I really be trying to set her up, maybe she will meet Mr Right choosing vegetables at the Supermarket. She certainly hadn’t asked for it.

    As the phone rings I’m telling myself to focus on myself and not worry about those around me.  My dreams are around my singing and Mark. Maybe Freda is alright as she is, we don’t all need partners.

    My stomach lurches at the man’s voice on the other end.

    The phone call

    “Hello, is that Ruby Wells?”

    “Errr, yes that’s me.”

    “I’m Charles Marsh, from Harper music.  We have been given your number by a friend of yours.  Would you be interested in coming for a meeting at our London office?”

    “Harper music?” I stammered.

    “Yes,  have heard about your singing.”

    “Would you like to meet my pianist, Freda?”

    “Can you play the piano Ruby?”

    “Yes, I can.” I was nervous now, they don’t want Freda.

    “It’s you we want to meet with, just you Ruby.  Can you come on Friday?  How about 1pm?”

    “Yes, err, yes Mr Marsh. I will see you then, thank you.”

    “We look forward to meeting you Miss Wells.”

    I hung up the phone, wondering who had given them my number, was it Mark? Now I have a new problem explaining to Freda how I seem to have been head hunted, and they don’t want her.  Time for another mug of tea, and more reflecting, how I wish so much that I could read the tea leaves.  My life has just got more complicated.

     

    Written for Grammys Grid first sentence – The trip was over but no one would..

    For more see – A sad ending, hospital and questions – part 15, this is part 16

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