The love of a mother
Our roots are deep just like my thoughts and her red sweater,
Looking at her I decided that life can only get better.
Through what we go through and all life’s challenges,
The discussions we have had to put our minds at ease.
Walking now we admire nature’s true beauty,
The animals, the plants and the wonderful country.
The sounds that the wind makes as it sings through the trees
As they stand there swaying against the breeze.
My daughter she looks at me and starts to smile,
My heart it melts as I stare back for a while.
I take her hand and we then continue to walk,
Looking at the floor, my beautiful daughter begins to talk.
Discussing the woods and discussing the leaves,
Watching the rabbits as they play in the trees.
Looking at the squirrels as they jump from bough to bough,
We both wished our walk wasn’t nearly over now.
Enjoying our time together, just the two of us,
Without daddy or her brother, no stress or fuss.
The time spent alone as just daughter and mother,
A love that can’t be replaced, a love like no other.
We walk and we talk, and my child starts to laugh,
As we sit and watch some rabbits play on the path.
We now pull our coats around us so tightly,
As the winter wind it moans, it does not blow lightly.
We are very soon now back at the car,
Strapping my daughter in, we don’t have to drive far.
Skipping through the afternoon traffic,
My daughter falls asleep, our walk was terrific.
As we arrive home, I am greeted by my son,
He was happy at home with daddy he hadn’t wanted to come.
I hugged him and assured him it was his turn tomorrow,
So, what did he want to do? it was my turn to follow.
As a mother of two most wonderful children,
I don’t find it hard to want to spend time with them.
For the times and the pleasures that our children bring,
Relax and enjoy them, try to make time to sing.
So, the roots of a love between a child and their mum,
Could be traced right back to before their life had begun.
From knowing baby is there until that first kick,
Or maybe to the first time that mum felt sick.
So tomorrow it is a day for mother and son,
A day to go out and try to have some fun.
Whilst our daughter spends time alone with her daddy,
She really adores him and he makes her happy.
So, the roots of our love trace back to before birth,
Forging a love that is greater then anything on earth.
The time spent together alone with my family,
Is always good as we are a powerful entity.
Written in response to – Wolff poetry writing challenge , using first sentence,
Our roots are deep just like my thoughts and her red sweater,
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30 Comments
You Can Always Start Now
I think one-on-one time is so important.
Just muddling through life
Yes it really is, thankyou.
willowdot21
A lovely poem really full of family sentiments. I enjoyed reading it 💜 truly it brought back many memories 💜
Just muddling through life
yes it is, but the pretty little girl pictured in the blue bell wood is not mine… plus the photo was taken a few months (Summer) before our walk happened in Winter.. oops.. I realised after I posted, but her top is red!
willowdot21
Well one out of three isn’t bad! I still like the poem 💜 right season, right girl or not!
Just muddling through life
haha,thanks, the word press free pictures are a bit limited
willowdot21
Yes have tried Pixabay they are all free to use and legal 💜
Just muddling through life
Yes I think I need to have a look at them.
willowdot21
I really do like them and use them a lot. I also use my own too. 💜
Just muddling through life
I try and use my own too, but I have no photos of my daughter by herself in a wood, or with a red top.. will definitely look at pixabay.
willowdot21
Get that child out of bed and drag her to the woods NOW! 🤭
Just muddling through life
ha ha now theres a plan x
willowdot21
Yup it’s called the love of a mother 🤭😁
Just muddling through life
I might if it was warm and daylight.. we haven’t been to the woods in a while, it has been so cold.
lindasschaub
This is a beautiful poem Mirian.
Just muddling through life
Thankyou Linda.
Linda J. Wolff | Editor of Wolff Poetry Literary Magazine.
Beautiful poem and so full of heartfelt emotion.
Just muddling through life
Thankyou Linda
Linda J. Wolff | Editor of Wolff Poetry Literary Magazine.
Have an amazing week too!
Just muddling through life
Hi hope you have an amazing week as well.
Image Earth Travel
Lovely poem and something that I’m sure your daughter will enjoy reading at a later time in her life.
Just muddling through life
Thankyou very much. Yes I’m sure she will.
angelanoelauthor
Really lovely. Being a mom is so special and I love how you bring uniqueness to the experience with both kids.
Just muddling through life
Thankyou Angela for your nice feedback.
Snuffy
Lovely, Marian. I can so picture you and your daughter on your walk together. Your poems are sure to be cherished later as they hold your special memories. 🙂
Just muddling through life
Thankyou very much Shannon.
Stevie Turner
Thanks for submitting your lovely poem to my contest.
Just muddling through life
You are welcome, thankyou for letting me submit it.
Mary-The Boondocks Blog
Hi Marian. This is such a beautiful poem and I hope that you share it with your children one day when they are old enough to appreciate it. You are blessed to be able to write down your thoughts and feelings in such an eloquent way. Your kids will appreciate all this when they are older. I had kept a diary for each one of my four when I was pregnant with them and gave it to them now that they are older. They complain to me that they can”t read my script writing so I’ll have to go back and re-write everything again. Your blog is a testament to the love you have for your children.
Just muddling through life
Thanks Mary, keeping a diary sounds amazing, I’m hoping my blog is still around for many more years. I had wondered about keeping a folder in word of everything but some if it is typed straight to the blog. Might be worth copying and pasting some over though. Sounds amazing that you kept a diary for all your of your kids. I had a baby book and it is still empty.. I regret not filling it now, thankyou x